New Mutants (Vol. 1) #16

"Away Game"
Published June 1984
Writer: Chris Claremont
Penciler: Sal Buscema
Inkers: Tom Mandrake and Kim Demulder
Cover Artist: Tom Mandrake

What's Going On?
After realizing that they had walked into a trap at the end of last issue, the New Mutants manage to distract the Hellfire Club's goons long enough to regroup and form a plan.  That plan: split up and try to rescue Kitty Pryde and Doug Ramsey.  As they go about their mission, though, they discover that the Hellfire Club has their own team of teenage mutant students --- the Hellions!  The two squads face off and when the dust settles, Kitty and Doug have not been rescued, and Cannonball, Magma, Sunspot and Wolfsbane have captured.  Dani and Magik escape via one of Magik's teleportation discs.

Sub-Plots, oh the Sub-Plots!
- The White Queen informs Kitty Pryde that her struggles against the Queen's psychic indoctrination are pointless; the White Queen has already broken her down.

- Dani continues to get emotionally distressed when she sees the effects of her mutant power on others.

- Amara's control over her mutant ability belies how little she has used it.  Considering that she had never gone full "Magma" in Nova Roma before the New Mutants came, that means she has more or less mastered the basics of her powers within only a few issues (since New Mutants #12).

- Thunderbird on the Hellions doesn't seem like too bad of a guy.  He expresses concern for both Sunspot and Wolfsbane when they get hurt.

- The Hellions don't appear to be great at teamwork.  I wonder if this will come into play later?

Writing!
This is a pretty fun issue.  The New Mutants don't appear to be horribly outclassed by their new rivals, the Hellions; last issue made the excellent point that the team would be hopelessly outmatched by the Hellfire Club, so giving them opponents that they can actually compete against was a good choice.  This sort of fight makes so much more sense than say, fighting (and defeating!) Sentinels or Viper.  Now, was sending in the junior team to capture the New Mutants a good strategic choice for the Hellfire Club?  Good lord, no.  The fact that the White Queen elaborates on the Hellfire Club's general motives makes this even more nonsensical, but I'll take the small victory of having villains in the same proverbial weight class as the New Mutants.

Art!
I know I've mentioned this before, but the quality of Sal Buscema's pencils are always shown to be questionable when there is an issue with multiple inkers.  I've gotten used to Tom Mandrake's inking (and cover art) --- it's not super-dynamic, but he is a solid storyteller and he does a pretty good job portraying the team as kids.  I didn't hate Kim Demulder's work in the back half of this issue, but the difference is noticeable.  Here is Mandrake on the left and Demulder on the right.

Again, nothing against Demulder, but I prefer this comic when the characters look their age.

Another weird thing in this issue was the coloring.  On the one hand, we finally got to see Dani use her powers and not have it presented in the hard-to-see day-glo pink that has been her trademark since her debut.  I don't have any strong preference in how Dani's powers should be visualized, as long as I can see the picture on the page.

On the other hand, this issue sees a lot of questionable coloring choices.  Throughout the issue, the colorist had trouble deciding where the New Mutant costumes stopped and where necks began.

Retrospectively Amusing:
- I am always interested by the changing of the Marvel corner box on the front cover, and I am frequently amused when comics try to disguise how scantily clad some characters are.  This month's corner box, with the White Queen's super-high-waisted panties gives the best of both worlds.

- The White Queen gives some exposition to explain the Hellfire Club's attitude toward mutants; they are simply a means to an end, and that end is power.

- This is the first appearance of James Proudstar, the younger brother of the late X-Man John Proudstar.  But how can Claremont draw attention to their connection without announcing it via exposition or outright stating Jimmy's name?  If you answered "Have them share the same codename, Thunderbird" you are only partially right.  You forgot, "Use an exclamation that only a Native American in a comic book would use" and "Color his skin so red that it almost matches the magenta of his costume."  Racism is so much easier than subtext!

- I wonder if the New Mutants will escape next issue?  (cue last panel)

Worth Noting:
- This is the first appearance of the Hellions as a team.  Specifically, Catseye, Empath, Jetstream, Roulette, Tarot, and Thunderbird.

Everything 80s:
- Jetstream's "compu-scan" computer-aided visual equipment may have as many as 8 bits of graphic power!